Thursday, August 6, 2020

quick write :24/7/20

The great T Rex Hunt By Noah 24.7

 Once Upon a Time, an angry clown was hunting a T-Rex. Because it ate his clown wife. The angry clown was armed with juggling balls. He was throwing them at the T-Rex. The T-Rex ran straight through accident and emergency the angry clown called on doctors to help him because it was an emergency so an entire Army doctors and a clown were chasing a t-Rex all across the world New Zealand, Australia … they ran to the Himalayas one of the doctors got some help from a yeti so now the the t-Rex was running from an Army of doctors, an angry clown and a yeti at Greenland the T-Rex gave up the T- Rex was so tired he to sleep for two years. The great T-Rex Hunt was over they celebrated put heaps of champagne, the was not angry anymore because he got his wife back. THE END

2 comments:

  1. good job that was well done next time u need to revise and edit and maybe you souldint have stolen my name

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  2. whatever about the name

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